Full Analysis and Review: Breach of Peace by Daniel Greene | Chapter 2

00:00 Introduction
03:09 Page 17
08:49 Page 18 and 19
18:03 Page 20
22:53 Page 21
28:16 Page 22
32:04 Page 23
36:40 Page 24
39:04 Page 25
43:20 Page 26 and Page 27
49:06 Page 28
49:07 Page 29
51:58 Summary

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In this video, we are going to read through CHAPTER 2 of Daniel Green's first novella, Breach of Peace, to examine exactly why people are complaining about its poor quality. We explore topics like the inciting incident, body horror, point of view, theme, word usage, terrible foreshadowing that ruins a story, and our favorite: Nazism. Wait, no that’s not our favorite, my bad. That’s the exact opposite of our favorite. But we’ll see how Daniel feels about it near the end(yes, it’s surprisingly relevant in a story about feminist detectives in ye olde revolver days).

Also near the end, we will go over a bit on Daniel’s damage control from the r/fantasy crisis he endured.

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