How I Lost Weight and Celebrated with a Pizza Trophy

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Like just how How does that feel Feel kind of bloated feel tired exhausted It's to take some recovery time Before we weighed five hundred and thirty seven pounds as you see here And now we weigh five hundred and forty seven We put on ten pounds But we still lost And to celebrate Joey winning I made him this pizza trophy